Monday, June 08, 2009

Hopscotch

I have some notes on your manuscript.

Thanks, Van!

8 comments:

Boopalina luv said...

Thats the same look and expressions i'd like to do with work!

pj said...

Butterscotch, does this involve doots? I'm just sayin'...

Fleetie said...

...And be prepared to be shredded YOURSELF if you ever submit such RUBBISH to Hopscotch again. This is a serious matter.

lady Anne Bunshteyn said...

After four years pouring out heart and soul on paper....... hoping for the Bookerprize.....!! This is a cold and mean bunishment.

janet2buns said...

Hopscotch is a harsh grammarian. He is demonstrating what will happen to US if he finds one more dangling participle or comma splice.

MRURT said...

try "yesterdays news" they may be able to use this.

Van said...

I am Hopscotch's mom - he disapproves of all of your comments!

Rabbits' Guy said...

Damn Rabbits .........